intheeventofdeath

@Celestial  i will definitely try. im drowning in school work, but im trying to check my wattpad everyyday. not going to well. but i will definitely try

intheeventofdeath

@Shelley2594 so i read it, and there was one part that i liked, but the timing wasnt good. and that was when Leo was talking to his dad, and then he gives this LONG paragraph about stuff that we shouldnt really learn till later on. like where the girl was raped and her uncle was a drunk. if bethany and kane do fall in love, i think that most of that information should be said by her. im sorry if im being mean, its your story, but thats my opinion. let me know if you need help with anything. :)

Shelley2594

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

Luv_Always_Sophia

hey really seriously thanks for becoming a fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm really am grateful for all of my fans, I never expected to getting any (seeing as I'm 12). Writing seems like the only thing I'm good at now. But anyways thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
          
          p.s. could you please tell me which story you prefer?
          thanksssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!