zoro_kawina
I read the first chapter and I find it really long and I'm not connecting with the book at all. I feel like I'm just reading it blank to be honest. You have good ideas but is it a struggle to write it out in chapters? That's my predicament but someone give me the advice. Be chill
zoro_kawina
Create a scene where Elise sarcasm first get challenge by Austin. Then you make your current chapter 1, chapter 2