intrigued161202

Hey! Hope you're doing well.
          
          If you enjoy exploring new stories, I’d love for you to check out my book! It’s a soft romance with a slow-burn love story, and I think you might really like it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/386296966?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=itssierra_3
          
          Let me know what you think! Happy reading!

I read the first chapter and I find it really long and I'm not connecting with the book at all.  I feel like I'm just reading it blank to be honest. You have good ideas but is it a struggle to write it out in chapters? That's my predicament but someone give me the advice. Be chill