merry (late) christmas, and happy holidays!
i had previously mentioned that i was *mildly* editing the second and third chapters, but that editing session somewhat turned into me just heavily editing the first three chapters.
nothing paramount has changed; i have only added more details and dialogue, but it sounds a lot better (in my unnecessary opinion).
i hope you guys enjoy the edits!
+ after this, I will not be making any more large edits until the book is finished.