ireviewforyou

Hey, would appreciate some constructive criticism on my story "Death and all its Friends" rubbishh title, yes. -__- I'm trying to do it justice, but any feedback from a reader would be great. Additionally, I'm trying to get some support for stories WITH PROPER GRAMMAR! Yes, mistakes are fine, but honestly, some of these stories are getting ridiculous. 

Hey :) I hope I’m not annoying but if I am, I a m terribly sorry. I just wish that when you have a spare time you can read my story which is ARRANGED MARRIAGE WITH A WOLF :)
          It’s not about arranged marriage on and on but also about conflicts, the past, denial and other great thing :D Thanks again :) good day!
          

          Read our stuff?
          
          -Food Dispenser and Captain Crunch

Hey, would you mind checking out my story Not What We Seem? I accept goof or bad criticism. Votes and fans too. Thanks.
          
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             Linnette

Hey, can you check out my stories? It would be really appreciative(:

Hey I was wondering if you could read my story "fallling for Ai Haibara" (romancea nd suspense/mystery) read/comment/vote! I rly appreciate it!

Hiya!~~
          
          I know these must get super annoying. And I was wondering if you had any spare time if you could check out some of my stories:
          
          1. Creating a Love Song with the Princes of Music
          2. Your Life is a Dream. Mine is a Nightmare.
          
          I would highly appreciate it if you commented with some advice and maybe vote on them too if you like them? Please and thank you! :) :)