Hi, I read The Extermination and I really like the concept you’ve built a strong fantasy foundation with the dragon lore and the shift into a darker era.
I’m a beta reader who helps early-stage writers improve readability, flow, and emotional impact without changing their ideas. Right now, your story has good imagination, but readers may struggle with grammar, pacing, and connecting emotionally to the events.
I can help you clean up the chapter, strengthen dialogue, and show you how to turn lore into scenes that keep readers hooked. If you’re open to feedback, I’d love to help you level this up.
