Hi @isabelleronin,
I just finished this Chasing Red and I have to say it’s addictive. The club scene, Caleb’s voice, the tension with “Red,” and that whole shift from flirtation to danger was written so naturally. Your pacing feels cinematic, and Caleb’s inner monologue is genuinely funny and charming.
A couple quick questions as a curious reader:
Will the story stay dual-POV or focus mainly on Caleb?
Is Red connected to his past, or is it just the spark he feels?
And will the tone lean more toward romance or suspense as it goes on?
Also your writing has a very visual feel. The red dress, the lighting, the parking-lot scene… it would translate amazingly into a polished cover or character art. If you think about giving the story a custom look, I’d love to share ideas (I’m a paid cover/illustration artist).