imjusttryingtowritee

Hey, I'm so sorry for intruding but I just wanted to share a piece of my heart with you, 
          
          Rab ka Shukrana (completed)- He was her brother’s best friend who never got the chance to talk to her, yet she was always part of their conversations, and their marriage felt like it was arranged by him. She, the ignored child but her brother’s everything, unknowingly fell for him at first sight, and together they embark on a journey of love and unbreakable bond.
          
          Tropes-
          ✯ Brother's best friend × Bestfriend’s sister 
          ✯ He fell first, she fell harder
          ✯ Strong ML × Strong FL
          ✯ Businessman × Lawyer
          ✯ childhood love ( for male lead)
          ✯ Love at first sight ( for female lead)
          
          Would love to hear your thoughts on it  
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/362697804?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=imjusttryingtowritee

browniewritess

Hey! 
          
          I have not completed the chapter yet! 
          
          Chapter aadha h hai and I think That I will be able to update it a little late but I have an idea. Can you message me on Insta? 
          
          If you can then drop me a DM. ASAP!

browniewritess

@browniewritess, thank you so much for your advice. I will surely work on it!   it just made me very happy that you were re reading the boookkkkk!!!
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ishi_2109

@browniewritess hey! firstly thannnnk youuuuuuu sooii much for updating just for me trust me in my whole life I will never ever forget this okayy now Listen I want to give you more like advice that please always ends the chapter with curiosity well said cliffhanger it brings more curiosity and as a reader we engross more  though you end the chapter with some sort of curiosity but cliffhanger had an another impact and, secondly in some scenes I feel you end it fast like you can add more details in that.... Yeh toh hogya mera gyan jo mujhe laga as I was re-reading your book and the best thing I like in your book is that you write the chapters differently like other authors you don't continue the the next chapter where you left previous one but to connect both you add the ending of that in the next chapter in different way and it's impressive trust me
            
            Okay it was my thoughts I thought to tell you as a reader.
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