ishiiiysq

ahhh just noticed that moonlight has 6k readers tysmmm <33

dearvmoon

omg i’m in love with your writing!! it’s so majestic and beautiful.  as someone who wants to become a better writer, do you have any tips? how do you come up with such poetic, descriptive prose? i’d genuinely love to learn from you.

ishiiiysq

thank you very much i appreciate sm <3 
            as for the writing: when i write a certain scene i try to describe it as i'm "writing for a blind person" if you know what i mean.  i'm always imagining it like "if i was the person who couldn't see how would i like my surroundings to be described". 
            and for the words i always google or research some synonyms or word with a similar meaning but sound more "beautiful". for example if i want to say that something is beautiful i would rather say gorgeous, stunning or breathtaking. 
            i would also recommend reading. it really helped me with my language in general!
            i hope i could help you ;)
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MiaAngel12345

heyyy 
          i love your book a lot, and really i wouldn’t mind if you want to unpublished it and then edit or you can just edit as you go

ishiiiysq

tysm this really means a lot to me <3
            
            I already edited some stuff but if i notice more errors, mistakes or plotholes i'll edit them additionally. 
            
            thank you again for your support <3
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ishiiiysq

i'm thinking of unpublishing and do some minor editing to the story and overall aesthetics. but i won't change much just some plotholes i found while proofreading. I first wrote this almost two months ago but i noticed that my writing has improved even if it is just a little.
          
          i'm still unsure tho so i need ur opinion 
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