@issako
Only 2 reflections left for this journal to end. I hope i was able to open your hearts with some of my thoughts. Thank you!
I just published "STATIC" of my story "IT BLEW, LIKE A DANDELION". https://www.wattpad.com/1617058313?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
I'm currently editing some of my prose. I'm planning to make it more a 3rd person talking, rather relaying it directly. If this one prose is more feasible? Or the original is still good?
The uploaded the edited and the original. What are your thoughts about it? It is still have its essence? Or nah?
https://www.wattpad.com/story/402612543
I have to change the book cover to make it more appealing. Do you think it's more appealing now? Unlike the one before?
https://www.wattpad.com/story/405171774
@issako It looks like the name of the book which isn't all that evocative. White on white puts emphasis on the interior font which is a little too soft to read.
Morning breeze rushes through.
The window sill creaks softly.
The lanai where you once sat.
The radio humming in the background.
Yet…
the feeling is unfamiliar.
The bed sheets lie dry,
left untouched.
The pillows feel strange.
The bedroom is still there,
just as it was before.
But something feels different.
Something feels distant—
unlike it once did.
The scent is gone,
replaced with emptiness.
I walk through a place
that once knew me.
I miss how it used to be.
Yet the feeling is no longer the same.
The scent is no longer there.
The certainty left long ago.
The home I once loved
now feels unfamiliar—
distant,
void.
It feels as though
it is no longer my home.
I just published "HOME" of my story "IT BLEW, LIKE A DANDELION". https://www.wattpad.com/1613112871?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
Hi, I just wanted to share this snippet here of my new chapter for "PIECE OF SLUMBER"
He squeezed my hand and pulled me forward with excitement, guiding me through the town. We passed the places we used to visit. The familiar store. The old food stall where we once laughed over simple meals. It felt like we were collecting memories again—carefully, deliberately.
Then we explored the new parts. New stores stood proudly beside the old ones. The plaza had a different energy now, its lights softer, wider. We wandered into unfamiliar alleys, laughing when we realized we didn't know where we were. Getting lost again.
Together. Whenever I was with him, everything felt lighter. Pure bliss. Like the world outside this town didn't exist. Like I didn't have responsibilities, fears, or a reality waiting for me somewhere beyond sleep.
I didn't want to wake up.
I didn't want to leave.
I wanted to stay here forever. With him.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/405171774
Now I've decided to change course on this novel. At first I thought could just tell a stories about my dream in every chapter. I think it might be boring. So, I will take it into something more story like, fantasy, romance, triller all in one. Not just a typical dream journal.
I hope i could give it justice till the end. Fingers crossed.
Well here's the link below.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/405171774
Hi, this would be my last poem for this series. My goal is 50 pieces for each. For the Fresh from the garden series. I hope you are still here with me, through my ups and downs., thoughts about love And Heartbreak. Thank you for just being here.
I just published "THE HEART" of my story "HAVE THORNS, LIKE A ROSE". https://www.wattpad.com/1602429004?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
Hi! It's me again! I uploaded another 2 chapters for my "PIECE OF SLUMBER" in case if you're into stories that deals with dreams, maybe this could be your cup of tea. although the first 9 chapters the stories are quite stand alone, no significant connection to each other. but i assure you it will be in the following chapters. I might include some of my dreams, about him. about my adventure inside my own dream land. well anyways... I hope anyone could read it. Thank you!
here's the link below
https://www.wattpad.com/story/405171774
Pushing limits,
Already at the peak.
Raging emotions,
Twisting—
Dark.
Blurred sights
As anger takes over.
Worlds already destroyed
As emotions prevail.
Things cannot be patched,
Healed,
Or renewed.
The pain has already deepened.
The hate is already here.
People around you get hurt
With one mistake.
Words keep repeating.
Excuses grow shallow.
Slowly, nothing is heard anymore
As anger takes control.
Everything goes silent.
Everything comes with a price.
Selfish gestures.
Selfish aims.
All for one principle.
You cannot even change—
Just for one ego.
You wanted to live
Your life
As it was before.
I just published "PEAK" of my story "IT BLEW, LIKE A DANDELION". https://www.wattpad.com/1601764834?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
which is better? make it more story like, add some scenes, characters to make it more fantasy? or just make it more journal type? like every chapter won't relate to each other?
I don't know what take., that will make people read..
the story is already good for me as is, but readers now a days are hook to read more on romance. adventure or mixed into one.
I'm confused. this is for my " Piece of Slumber"
https://www.wattpad.com/story/405171774