@issako
Hi, this would be my last poem for this series. My goal is 50 pieces for each. For the Fresh from the garden series. I hope you are still here with me, through my ups and downs., thoughts about love And Heartbreak. Thank you for just being here.
I just published "THE HEART" of my story "HAVE THORNS, LIKE A ROSE". https://www.wattpad.com/1602429004?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
Hi! It's me again! I uploaded another 2 chapters for my "PIECE OF SLUMBER" in case if you're into stories that deals with dreams, maybe this could be your cup of tea. although the first 9 chapters the stories are quite stand alone, no significant connection to each other. but i assure you it will be in the following chapters. I might include some of my dreams, about him. about my adventure inside my own dream land. well anyways... I hope anyone could read it. Thank you!
here's the link below
https://www.wattpad.com/story/405171774
Pushing limits,
Already at the peak.
Raging emotions,
Twisting—
Dark.
Blurred sights
As anger takes over.
Worlds already destroyed
As emotions prevail.
Things cannot be patched,
Healed,
Or renewed.
The pain has already deepened.
The hate is already here.
People around you get hurt
With one mistake.
Words keep repeating.
Excuses grow shallow.
Slowly, nothing is heard anymore
As anger takes control.
Everything goes silent.
Everything comes with a price.
Selfish gestures.
Selfish aims.
All for one principle.
You cannot even change—
Just for one ego.
You wanted to live
Your life
As it was before.
I just published "PEAK" of my story "IT BLEW, LIKE A DANDELION". https://www.wattpad.com/1601764834?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
which is better? make it more story like, add some scenes, characters to make it more fantasy? or just make it more journal type? like every chapter won't relate to each other?
I don't know what take., that will make people read..
the story is already good for me as is, but readers now a days are hook to read more on romance. adventure or mixed into one.
I'm confused. this is for my " Piece of Slumber"
https://www.wattpad.com/story/405171774
Time made it realize
that everything in the past
no longer makes sense.
Was it ever worth anything?
The mind twisted the heart again—
or perhaps the mind only overpowered it.
Or does it?
Maybe the heart hid everything,
blinding the mind instead.
Pretending to forget it all,
pretending not to know—
even now.
Until time reveals everything.
The truth slowly surfaces.
The heart keeps hiding—
the love that was lost,
forgotten,
neglected.
Only now is it revealed.
The mind slowly remembers,
and the ache begins to long again.
It hurts—
without warning,
without knowing why.
It hurts.
I just published "UNCOVERED BY TIME" of my story "HAVE THORNS, LIKE A ROSE". https://www.wattpad.com/1601516939?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
Mam, sorry for the absence, I had some academic and council work piled on my head. But now, I've read the 5th part of slumber and the new poem you published.
@NILESHKUMAR_2412 it's okay.. real life is more important.. just don't get lost in the way, while writing.
A twisted dream.
Waking from it,
it felt heavy.
It felt real.
In my dream,
a love was confessed—
a love once lost,
a love long forgotten.
Even after ten years had passed,
someone came back
and confessed everything.
But this time,
it was a ghost.
A ghost from the past.
A ghost long forgotten.
The thing is—
in real life, that love never bloomed.
Only friendship.
Only something platonic.
Just classmates,
sitting together,
sharing aspirations in life.
But then why?
Why now?
Why that dream?
Unsettled feelings
long forgotten?
Feelings never realized?
I woke up confused.
I woke up heavy.
I just published "SOMETHING UNFINISHED" of my story "DREAM, LIKE A POPPY FLOWER". https://www.wattpad.com/1600561649?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
Love has no boundaries.
Soulmates are made,
destined for one another.
Even in death,
they find their way back—
no matter how long it takes.
For them, death
is not an ending,
but the beginning
of another chapter.
A pause in time
where love continues
in quiet waiting.
One searches for the path home,
while the other waits—
believing,
hoping,
trusting they will meet again.
Love knows no limits.
When it is meant to be,
it will always be.
Soulmates—
even in the afterlife—
wait for each other,
until they are reunited
once more.
I just published "SOULMATES" of my story "HAVE THORNS, LIKE A ROSE". https://www.wattpad.com/1598178437?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
Love—
it blooms into something beautiful,
like a novel you once read,
like a movie that stayed with you.
As destiny quietly weaves its thread,
time strengthens what was meant to grow.
In this lifetime,
you never thought love could be like this—
a love that always finds its way back,
a love patient enough
to wait for you to notice it.
Patience teaches us
to wait for the one
God has destined,
crafted,
and prepared for us.
And when we finally find it,
we must fight for it,
hold it close,
and never let it go.
As we witness this kind of love,
we are reminded
that hope still exists—
that God strengthens us,
teaches us,
guides us.
“Well,” I say quietly to myself,
“this kind of love still lives.”
To those who ended up with their first love.
To those who waited
and found their way back to a lost puppy love.
To those destined for each other
from the very beginning—
I salute you.
For love, to you,
is not just a word—
it is a feeling,
a commitment,
a faith.
I just published "GOD'S TIMING" of my story "HAVE THORNS, LIKE A ROSE". https://www.wattpad.com/1596199267?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako
Mam, from the poems of mine you read, which one do you think is the best one?