issako

I'm planning to submit this one poem to a local Poetry contest. Theme is beginning and end. Can i ask for your honest feedback? Like any changes that I need to revised before submitting it? 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/21058133

          What I love about Daydream isn't simply that it focuses on love inside a dream.
          It's because I want you to experience what I felt.
          To fall in love.To be loved.To lose someone.To have your heart broken.
          Pieces of Slumber was all about my dreamland—the place I created and returned to again and again.
          But Daydream is different.
          Every dream takes me somewhere else. A different place. A different person. Sometimes, a different version of myself.
          These are dreams I've written down from my own journal. Feelings I carried with me after waking up. Moments that felt so real that I didn't want them to end.
          So come with me.
          Close your eyes.
          Let's experience what it's like to love inside a dream. 
           A spin-off of Pieces of Slumber.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/414992371

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One meeting.
          One sleepless night.
          One dream.
          Then, the impossible happened...
          He found her again.
          Maybe some people are simply meant to cross our path twice.
          
           The new revised You, Me and Love -Chapter two is live!!!
          I just published "You, Me and Destiny" of my story "YOU, ME AND LOVE". https://www.wattpad.com/1570084578?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako

DESTINY BROUGHT HER BACK TO ME.
          The universe just forgot to mention...
          ...SHE’S WITH MY EX-BEST FRIEND
          
          Check out my revised chapter one. ♥️♥️
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/400211232

"Writing is a constant learning process, and lately, I've felt that some of my stories need a little extra love to reach their full potential. I've decided to temporarily take down You, Me and Love, Lady Inside the Library, and Children of the Fallen Dawn so I can revise them. I want to bring these worlds to life by focusing more on showing the action rather than just telling you about it! Thank you for the incredible support. I hope you'll join me on this journey as I re-release these improved chapters soon!"

Hi!! I'd love to know your opinion on my poetry collection!! ❤️

What will you do, if someone you thought came back inside your dream? But what if that someone is not the one you wanted to see first? 
          Inside our dream, we had our moments. Mine was like this, of all places. The least person that i wanted to see in real life, shows up inside your dream. 
          I just published "FACES" of my story "PIECES OF SLUMBER". https://www.wattpad.com/1627441250?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=issako

Hello fellow watty! Good day!
          
          Please feel free to check out my poems. https://www.wattpad.com/story/406103174?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ThoughtsWrittenInInk
          
          I would very much appreciate it☺️
          Please feel free to vote and comment!
          
          Thank you! ✨ 

I had a dream of this the other night. I just can't let is pass. It's plot can't be part of my Pieces of Slumber. Instead I made a different story base on that dream. 
          
          Well, here it is... I know the title maybe cliche' but the plot is worth to read. I hope anyone. Someone. Could read this. It means alot. Thank you!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410954582