@ithecosmicriver
The One Way Home
Chapter 12: When A Door Closes
OUT!!!!
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Chapter 11: Home
The One Way Home
OUT!
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@AdrianMeisIT thank you (for actually reading it). I'll make sure to check yours out when I've got some time. :)
@ithecosmicriver Hi River! I've been reading The One Way Home and wanted to say how much I'm enjoying it. I really like the way Alice's story unfolds, with each post adding new details. It also feels to me as though there are some strong literary influences behind the writing. The descriptions are particularly well done and do a great job of building tension and atmosphere without slowing the story down. One thing I especially noticed is your use of rhetorical devices such as anaphora. Like the repeated "I waited, I waited..." passage, which works beautifully. It creates a sense of anticipation and anxiety, while also giving the prose a very musical rhythm. I'm writing a novel in English myself (British English, specifically), and since I'm not a native speaker, I'm always looking for honest feedback. If you happen to have a few minutes to look at part of my first chapter, I'd be really grateful to hear what you think. Even a brief impression would help. I'm not looking for follows, votes, or any kind of exchange—I'd simply appreciate an honest opinion on how the English reads and whether anything sounds unnatural to a native speaker. Thanks, and best of luck with your writing!
The One Way Out
Chapter 10: Magdalene
OUT! YAY!
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Chapter 9: Purity (2)
The second part of the two-parter "The Purity Of The Count's Son"
OUT
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Chapter 8: The Count's Son (1)
From The One Way Home
It's out.
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Alongside "The One Way Home" i am also working on more stories. So, there is more to come. Had some great ideas so I'll be trying to write them all down.
Side B of The Mortwood Hitcher is out.
https://www.wattpad.com/1628904253?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=ithecosmicriver
Just posted a new story.
The Mortwood Hitcher. You can find Side A in the link below.
https://www.wattpad.com/1628573012?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=ithecosmicriver
Side B coming soon.
Chapter 7: A New World, A New Life
New chapter for The One Way Home is OUT
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IT'S OUT!!!!!!
New and Improved stories.
"The Man In The Tub" has now become "The One Way Home."
With the new chapter, "The Mind Of Alice," OUT NOW!!!!!!!!
It may not look like much right now, but trust me, the story only gets better.
https://www.wattpad.com/1524704919?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=ithecosmicriver