Hey @ithinkpurplerocks.
Thank you for the follow:) It means a lot and hopefully you'll soon get to read some of my upcoming works.
I read your work and honestly it has a great plot to it, it just needs a little work grammar-wise. You have interesting ideas I just feel like you're having trouble executing them well. I hope I didn't offend you in any way but I like to help out whenever I get the time and chance.