I’ll do a self reflection for why i think i shouldn’t continue the current Z Virus:
There’s too many characters in the cast. I am somewhat a dystopian, apocalypse fanatic and i ignored an important part of those types of stories. There is about 1-3 main characters max. You can have many side characters, but having 8 main characters was absolutely ridiculous, and extremely difficult to keep up with. And that’s not even tailored for dystopian type stories!! I’m telling you, never have 8 main characters, it’s a nightmare for both the writer and the reader. 3 if your intermediate, maybe 5 or 6 if you’re skilled. But hey, i don’t know what the worlds best writer looks like, so maybe 15 main characters is what YOUR fan-fiction needs! (disclaimer: this is not an insult, i am simply just bad a comedy)
secondly, i was very eager to rush into what i had in my head during the early stages of the Z Virus (also i never liked the name of the book, and the plot/main villain was stupid) so in my writing i jumped a lot, and ((this is the worst part)) i WENT TO LIKE- FIVE PLACES IN ONE CHAPTER. KEEP YOUR WORLD SMALL PEOPLE. (2)