Hello all! Just dropping in to tell you that I am doing some revision work on She Took My Breath Away. A while back I had an editor from USC (For those who don't know, that the University of Southern California) edit my book and she pointed out a few major plot flaws in it. Therefore I am giving the story a bit of a makeover. The main part of the story won't change much, but a few of the characters will do slightly different things. That also means that some chapters will change, and some will be deleted entirely. The bottomline is, I was thinking about taking She Too My Breath Away down and repostng it. My question is, who would like to re-read the story and its changes? Let me know what you think!