its_suman15

Ch -8 of muhabbat⭐ is now out. Next chapter is already on stck. 
          	https://lovesaga13.stck.me/story/1600223/MUHABBAT

dinnnooooo

Aapki story ka concept aur writing potential kaafi strong hai. Story mein emotions aur ideas bahut achhe hain. Mujhe bas ek chhota sa suggestion dena tha ki agar Hindi thodi aur simple ya commonly used ho jaaye, toh aur zyada readers easily connect kar paayenge.
          Saath hi, paragraph spacing, dialogues aur line breaks ko thoda aur organize kiya jaaye toh reading experience aur smooth ho sakta hai. Isse story padhte waqt flow bana rahega aur readers ka interest bhi zyada time tak bana rahega.
          Baaki overall story kaafi achhi lagi aur isme bahut potential hai. Ye sirf meri personal opinion hai, isse galat ya bura mat maaniyega. Dil pe mat lijiye, main bas ek reader ke perspective se apni honest feedback share kar rahi hoon. 

its_suman15

@dinnnooooo  thank you for your suggestions.... Pkka mai dhyan rakhungi... ❤... 
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