kawaiihamsterberryyy
Are you okay? You've been quiet scene August
its_zaru
its_zaru
Yoooooo!
Is anyone alive today?
fembaku
hello. hru?
GayTableTM
Your books are amazing and it motivated me to write one :)) do you have any tips for writing? ✨ I can't wait for another chapter but don't rush yourself :>
its_zaru
@ -_drunkbetch_- I guess my biggest advice is don't be discouraged when it doesn't get a lot of reads! It's possible for it to be popular immediately but it can also take months before it gets 500 reads.
Think it through don't just start writing but make up a plan of what you want to happen.
Then read other stories. It can improve your writing and you can compose your own way of writing. Some like to write really detailed other like it more vague and up to the reader to imagine.
Anything else is really up to you to figure out
Tsuzasi
I little advice on ur story. The MC is nice but it can be more refined by giving it some flaws in her characters. As flaws will make the story more interesting. Second u need to add a little more description of the places overall I think the story is good and It has potential to become great. Lastly make a quick review of the story and correct the grammers and words that r offplace. Hope this will help u.