@itsblondiebaby
Hey can you read my book Melissa and give some feedback? Please.
http://w.tt/1Vnfwn1
Thanks.
@DipashaSarkar Sorry! About reaching out to you so late, i havent been on here for awhile.
Hey! I hate to bother you again, but i thought i should let u know since i really appreciated your feedback last time! Because of how helpful it was! When I first started writing, I was writing personal short stories and I just published my first collection of short stories romanizing the catastrophe that is my love life. Its my first personal book, and it took me awhile to gain the courage to actually publish it because of how close it is to me! I hope to hear from you soon and I hope you enjoy!
Hey I loved your book and I was wondering if you could check mine out and give me your opinion thanks babe ❤️
@azoiic Thank you! Im having trouble describing details. Sorry, it tooke me forever to read your book but your first chapter was incredible! The words, the right amount of detail is amazing.
Your account is goals, please check out my story 'getting to know you' and tell me if theirs anything I should change.
@pathetic-aesthetic Its awesome!! Just make your sentences easier to read and make the sentences flow nicely, dont cut them off. But its good!!
