Hi,
I just finished reading your story, and I was completely drawn into the haunting, atmospheric tension between Cherith and Carlisle! The way you juxtaposed the quiet café in rainy Forks with the eerie undercurrent of vampire lore—Cherith’s curiosity about Myths of the Night, Carlisle’s unnerving beauty, and that ancient leather notebook with recipes dating back to the 1600s—gave me chills. The moment Carlisle leaves the notebook and disappears into the mist? Perfection. I couldn’t stop imagining how striking this would look as a comic: the moody gray tones of Forks, Cherith’s trembling hands tracing centuries-old ink, and Carlisle’s golden eyes lingering in the shadows like a Renaissance painting come to life.
Your writing balances quiet mystery and simmering dread so well. The vampire lore details—unchanging bodies, frozen aging, the “gift and curse” of immortality—are begging to be visualized. The contrast between Cherith’s mortal curiosity and Carlisle’s timeless presence feels tailor-made for bold, atmospheric panels.
I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to draw your story into a comic. No pressure, of course—I just think your work would look incredible in comic form! The mix of historical intrigue, gothic romance, and subtle horror is exactly the kind of storytelling that thrives visually.
If you’re interested, message me on Instagram (@lizziedoesitall) or Discord (lizziedoesitall). Let me know what you think!
Best,
Lizzie
