The chapter where the wedding happened made me laugh so much.
When the priest said "You may kiss the braid."
I thought of Jack kissing her legendary French braid.
Also what's Elsa's real age because the edited part say twenty, turning twenty so I assumed it was twenty one and then unedited parts say eighteen making me imagine her younger. I fought so hard to think of her as a twenty two year that just looks young but it didn't work that well, so I try to ignore the subject of age completely when I read.