Soo, I went ahead and posted the very first chapter of “The Heart of the Moon”!
I was working on it tonight and I felt it was what I wanted it to be so I decided to go ahead and post it to get some feedback and constructive criticism sooner rather than later.
And, I got to that point where I thought it was just enough, I felt like it was the right amount of suspense and whatnot to end it where I did.
Honestly I’m a bit proud of myself for writing as much as I did, I know its not much but it’s still something!
Another thing I wanted to say, I added a picture at the top of a sort of balcony scene to kind of set the moon and setting for you guys, but I’m not entirely sure it will show up because when I previewed as a reader I couldn’t see it, so please let me know if you can see it. If not that’s perfectly fine, that just means I’ll have to do some digging to see if I can find the issue there.
Also! I will probably start working on chapter two tomorrow, I’m definitely going to try and put a little more effort in to make it longer, so I will try to have it out this Saturday on the 24th for you all to read!
Remember any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is very much welcome! I do want to try and improve my writing if I can! And Again, thank you all so so much! I love you bunches! Upward and Onward!
-Kye <3