Damonh

hi!
          I'm Yna and i'm currently writing "Dangerous Prince: The Choice"...
          i hope you have free time to read it...
          please leave a comment there (I just want to know what you think about it... and if you liked it)
          here are the few lines from the preface... 
          
          "I love you, Kira. Do you love me too?" she whispered those words slowly, allowing each words to sink into my mind, heart and soul.
          
          Damn it! She asked me again! This was the third time! When she first asked me if I love her I answered NO without a doubt. On the second time she asked me if I love her I answered NO again - but that time with a little doubt. And now... I don't know what to say.
          
          I opened my mouth to say NO but she held up her hand to stop me. "If you say no, I promise I will leave you alone and you will never see me again. If you say yes, I stay by your side forever no matter what happens."
          
          If I say no she'll stop stalking me. She'll stop intimidating me. She'll leave me alone. Alone. Again. I won't get the chance to see those deep blue eyes again that touches my heart. And there was no doubt that I'll miss her enchanting smile...
          
          The idea of saying yes was so tempting. She will stay here with me. But my life was one big hell. Her life with me will be miserable. There was a possibility that she'll get hurt or worse... die.
          
          "Kira?" Annalee whispered.
          
          I sighed heavily. I had to say it. Now. "Fine. I'll give you my answer."
          
          thanks! ^_^

maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls
          
          please read until chapter 2 before u decide if you would like to continue reading the story or not :3

M51exposed

Hi! Could you read my story?!?! Plz! I really need some feed back! COOL!
          
          Prologue… 
          
          215 years. It's been 215 years since I was born. Today is my 215th birthday. Sometimes though I wish that my life had ended 200 years ago. When I look in the mirror, I don't see an old woman. I don't see a young woman. That's just it, I don't see myself at all when I look in the mirror. I'll give you three guesses- what am I? 
          I know what you're thinking. "there is no such thing as vampires. They only exist in myths and legends and the occasional modern fiction novel." 
          Well, you're right, sort of. Vampires as portrayed in horror books, or even romance books, are fiction. But just because some over-creative author portrayed us wrong, we don't exist? Wrong. We do exist. We aren't human. We live forever. Or at least until I was made.
          I am the exception.
          
          DO YOU LIKE IT??????????????? YES? NO? THEN READ THE REST!!!!!