itsnotzaahhh

Heyyy<3
          
          I am writing a book called promises and I am kind of new to this writing thing and I've only posted one chapter soo would you take a look at my book and tell me if it's missing something and if I need to add something to it and all and what you feel about my writing if it's terrible could you pleaseee please help me how to improve it as I really enjoyed writing the first chapter and I am a bit excited... So if you do have the time please check it out will you... 
          
          Thank you for your time<3