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I feel bad to the author below asking  for my feedback and help on their work—i was literally a child who knows nothing about writing ToT and my knows-it-all ass had the absolute courage to say yes mbmbmbmbmb

Lo Siento Mi Amore, still don’t love it. 
          
          I gave up midway and skipped to the end, as expected gurly chose the man who left her and hurt her. Thus I didn’t like Alfredo’s chasing arc cuz fck him. I also hate how almost everyone becomes an antagonist making Alfredo look like a better option to root for wtf EEEW?? 
          I also didn’t like Amnesia Agnes, she’s just gets annoying  the more I read her POV.
          
          Though, on the other hand, I love the author’s writing style especially that it is in Tagalog. It’s written with great care and passion towards the language making the story more dramatic. It makes reading a beautiful experience. 
          

Villainess genre is getting dull ngl. like it would need hours of scrolling and judging to be able to find a good one 

Please give me a feedback about my story Destyne Academy and comment on my new story The Fallen Angel for me to know if the prologue is great and then I'll publish the first chapter. Thank you

Hi! Thank you for reading my book