Anyone who reads your story is making an investment of their time. Make that investment worth it by giving them something to care about right off the bat. Readers like to know what they're getting into from the get-go-taking them for the ride of their lives is what the rest of the story is for.
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Story by Prince Singh
(quote) Day-1
"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live witho...