hello my love, of course i can <3.
i personally think the pace of the book is perfect, from the adorable crushes mira and harry have on eachother, to the slowburn of learning more and more about mira as a character. you've added mira and her family/friends in so smoothly, it's as if they were always there. and you having made them a big part of mira's character is so special to me as i often see people just add their oc's to the golden trio and their family is an already canon one, and so seeing you write my girl mira as an actual character instead of just harrys love interest make me so giddy.
i'm loving the book babes, make sure you're getting rest, when you need it, and drinking lots of water <333