itzsarah123

Ramadan Mubarak to all the Muslims out there✨ May this month bring peace, mercy, and blessings to everyone  That's why I've paused writing my other book in draft, i'll continue after Ramadan <3

Saherra

Hi ♡
          I just finished reading your book, and I wanted to share my thoughts. First of all, congratulations on your first story! The plot is really good and has so much potential.
          Since it’s your first book, a little writing improvement will make it even more amazing — but that’s completely normal. You’ve done a great job, and I truly appreciate your effort and creativity. Keep writing and improving.  

itzsarah123

@Saherra Awhh tysm! And yes, i will be improving, i appreciate the review soo much tysm once again ㄟ(≧◇≦)ㄏ
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Niti_Ink

Hi,
          Can you please read only 1 or 2 chapters of this book and continue only if you like it but do give it a chance....i promise you won't regret it....
          
          "Aap... yahan?"
          
          He stopped just inches away.
          
          Too close.
          
          Their breaths tangled. Her heart pounded in her ears.
          
          " Akhirkar 6 mahine ki aankh micholi ke baad aap samne he mere..."
          
          "Pahli mulakat yaadgar honi chahiye na jaan...
          (leaning in, lips almost touching hers) 
          please don't stop me..."
          
          The first brush of his lips against hers was gentle, almost too gentle for the intensity between them. 
          
          But the moment he felt the warmth of her lips, the floodgates opened.
          
          The kiss deepened - demanding, possessive, and yet tender, as though he was trying to memorize every sensation.
          
          Once he finds her breathless, he left her lips with a pop sound and move little away just to see her now ruined lipstick and flushed cheeks...
          
          "Roshni...Tum meri ho..."
          "Rudra... I..."
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/393435757?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Niti_Ink
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itzsarah123

@Niti_Ink I'll definitely give it a try my love <3
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