Sereneflow

Hey hi!! I am a new writer, writing my first story. Can you please read and comment on it so that helps me gain some review. It would be a great help if you give me some insights. If you are into mystery and romance please give it a try.
          
          Aditya and Tanisha find themselves meeting again and again despite wanting nothing more than staying away from each other. Aditya is a special crime branch head chasing a crime while Tanisha is a school teacher running away from a secret.
          Circumstances lead them to meet each other for a small time forming a truce only to get seperated again.
          But this time, Aditya decides to marry her. What made him take that decision? And how is she going to react to it? 
          What happened to the case he is solving?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390516339

Zahra0731563

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Zahra0731563

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itzzmahii_a01

@zahra0731563 fir sabne pari ko sorry bola and matter raat ko sort ho gya aaj bhi thodi behar huyi ki ishanvi (abeynikl) ke liye kisine stand nhi liya and all but then sab sort ho gya fir ek ladki aayi or voli ki sympathy gainer hai sab idhar sabko bura bolne lagi phir usko sabne samjhayaa usko reply back Kiya ye sb huaa jitna mujhe pata hai
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the_inked_secrets

Hey! So I just published my Wattpad story.
          It’s called Even After Everything — a school romance that’s messy, dramatic, a little heartbreaking, but sooo personal to me.
          If you’re into bossy, broken girls and golden retriever boys who never stop trying… this one’s for you.
          
          Give it a shot? I’d genuinely love to know what you think.
          Here’s the link: 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/394953029?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=n0tdia14
          

serendipitywriters_

Hey!! If you're into stories with multi-couple drama, mystery, thriller tension, dark secrets, and a little bit of rom-com spice, then you’ll love “THE FALL OF ERUDITE.” This isn’t just a love story—it’s a layered, slow-burning, emotionally charged ride through betrayal, hidden pasts, and long-lost connections. The story follows three childhood friends—now grown into a businessman, political heir, and lawyer—as they reunite with the girls they left behind. But what they don’t know is that those same girls—now a top surgeon, a fierce lawyer, and a famous director—the women have their own reasons for returning—and they’re not just here for closure. As their paths collide once again, old sparks resurface, identities clash, and every moment brings them closer to the truth... or total destruction. If you love powerful female leads, complicated pasts, multiple POVs, high-stakes romance, and unpredictable twists, this one’s for you.
          Three couples. One tangled past. A mission that could destroy them—or bring them back to each other.
          Start reading The Fall of Erudite now—because some secrets don’t stay buried forever.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/391754934-the-fall-of-erudite

_venomrose

What happens when a boy who hides his pain behind poetry... shifts next door to a girl who lives with laughter in her eyes and rebellion in her heart?
          
          Yug Deshmukh is quiet, intense, and bruised by memories he doesn’t talk about.
          Vrinda Rathod is sunshine in human form — loud, fearless, and impossible to ignore.
          
          They’ve seen each other before... once, years ago, when life was simpler and hearts weren’t so guarded.
          Now, as neighbours, their worlds collide again — one finding comfort in silence, the other breaking it with joy.
          
          But not every love story begins with sparks.
          Some begin with healing.
          Some with poetry.
          And some with a shared past that neither of them has dared to remember… yet.
          
          Tropes you’ll find inside:
          – Neighbours
          –  Friends to Lovers
          – Sunshine x Sunshine
          – Childhood Sweethearts
          – She is his Healer
          – Psychologist x professor 
          – Slow Burn & Soft Hearts
          -- Forced marriage 
          If you love emotionally layered stories with a warm touch of nostalgia, unspoken feelings, and two people growing into each other — this one’s for you.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/393710607?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_venomrose

TheEthereal_Tales

"Excuse me for interrupting! I'm deeply sorry for the intrusion. I came across your discussion and thought you might enjoy my Royal Indian Dark Romance book, -:    . It's a gripping tale of love, drama, and intrigue. If you're interested, I'd be honored if you'd check it out: 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/391478559?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=TheEthereal_Tales
          
          
          Thank you for your time❤️, and please accept my apologies again!"

_dreamy_narratives_

Hey,
          Sorry to bother you but if you have some time please check out my books you will surely love them
          Duty Bound Hearts - soft romance
          Shattered Justice : a web of lies - dark romance
          Tera junoon meri tabaahi - insta short story
          
          Do follow on instagram as well don't forget to vote, comment and share 
          
          Insta I'd _dreamy_narratives_
          
          Have a great day ahead ❤️
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/387123727?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_dreamy_narratives_