New chapter is up and I always appreciate feedback! Is the story too segmented? Hard to follow? Convoluted? It's the first story I've written and I have a lot of learning to do. Hopefully updates will be more frequent, as I have an okay-ish idea of what's gonna happen. The mystery of it all is figured out, but there's just some fine-tuning to do here and there.
Agh, writing is hard.