j1996r

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@ScorpionKid Hey i Love the Story the whole secret from zach  if you don't mind her are some things i hope that would Happen in the next chapter's 
          	- alex confront lena 
          	- lena sad she searched after ethan long ago because she was jealous about zach 
          	- alex try talk zach into to tell the police 
          	-zach don't want to 
          	-alex go to the police and Tell the Story without zach approval 
          	-zach got made and don't want to see him anymore 
          	-alex is devastated and walks out of the Hospital and remind a face 
          	- flashback : he saw the face in front of his house after the first time zach was at his home and in front of his school the next day 
          	-Zach gets a visit  from ethan 
          	-ethan tries to kill zach 
          	-but alex turn round and ran in the Hospital and helped zach 
          	-ethan got arrested 
          	-alex is sorry for going to the police 
          	-zach is sorry about that he got so made about it 
          	

j1996r

@ScorpionKid no you are awesome i love your style how you write your Story´s  Keep doing it . and if you want some Feedback or some idea´s in the future ask me any time i would love to help
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ScorpionKid

@sesi_ramierz I love it. thanks for the feedback. you're awesome
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j1996r

Pesan ini mungkin menyinggung
@ScorpionKid Hey i Love the Story the whole secret from zach  if you don't mind her are some things i hope that would Happen in the next chapter's 
          - alex confront lena 
          - lena sad she searched after ethan long ago because she was jealous about zach 
          - alex try talk zach into to tell the police 
          -zach don't want to 
          -alex go to the police and Tell the Story without zach approval 
          -zach got made and don't want to see him anymore 
          -alex is devastated and walks out of the Hospital and remind a face 
          - flashback : he saw the face in front of his house after the first time zach was at his home and in front of his school the next day 
          -Zach gets a visit  from ethan 
          -ethan tries to kill zach 
          -but alex turn round and ran in the Hospital and helped zach 
          -ethan got arrested 
          -alex is sorry for going to the police 
          -zach is sorry about that he got so made about it 
          

j1996r

@ScorpionKid no you are awesome i love your style how you write your Story´s  Keep doing it . and if you want some Feedback or some idea´s in the future ask me any time i would love to help
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ScorpionKid

@sesi_ramierz I love it. thanks for the feedback. you're awesome
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ScorpionKid

thanks for the following. what do you think of 'The Ultimate Choice'? im currently trying to pick up the pieces on where I want it to go. also im thinking about turning it into a series! what do you think about that?