@Redauthor It was a good storyline with excellent dialog and flow. As far as the ending I was left a little confused. I hope that he went after her but who knows. I personally like it when stories spell out the ending and not leave you guessing. But it was still good.
@j85perz Thanks a lot for your feedback! Yes,I like to think they ended together, and actually it was in my mind at the end, but I didn't want to spell it out :-)
@Redauthor It was a good storyline with excellent dialog and flow. As far as the ending I was left a little confused. I hope that he went after her but who knows. I personally like it when stories spell out the ending and not leave you guessing. But it was still good.
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I can’t stop smiling. Even my dad commented on it and asked if something good had happened, I just shrugged and sa..." http://wattpad.com/story/6559325
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Thanks for being a fan and adding BN, BV, and the x-mas short to your list. I hope you'll check out the Halloween one too. Oh, and there's a very short flash fic piece up too. :0)