j85perz

@Redauthor It was a good storyline with excellent dialog and flow. As far as the ending I was left a little confused. I hope that he went after her but who knows. I personally like it when stories spell out the ending and not leave you guessing. But it was still good. 

j85perz

@Redauthor It was a good storyline with excellent dialog and flow. As far as the ending I was left a little confused. I hope that he went after her but who knows. I personally like it when stories spell out the ending and not leave you guessing. But it was still good. 

j85perz

""Oh, I live for you and only you. I live to kiss you, to bite you, to eat you, to own you, all of you, to fuck you. Oh how I live for you, Mariah!" I whisper to her as my fingers searches her, deep in the inside." http://wattpad.com/story/3061999