Good morning/day/evening/night everyone!
I have something importnat I'd like to address concerning Sacrifice:
I'm kind of not proud of it. Though it's one of my oldest books, and the first book I've ever completed, I feel really icky whenever I re-read the first two chapters. I've pondered it for a very long time, and I'm starting to doubt if I did the first two chapters right, and if I'd written something wrong that could offend someone.
Can I get some feedback? What should I do about those two chapters? Should the ending have been structured differently?
Those who have read Sacrifice fully, could you please give me some guidance as to what should be changes and what should be left alone?
Thank you.
- Jules