Hi, I'm an aspiring writer. I really need constructive critisism on how to improve. Please comment if you have any constructive critisism. Or comment if you enjoy my latest book.
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Story by Jacelin
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Laura Fondello, a grieving 15 year old outcast falls miraculously in love with Isaac Williams. Laura explain...