@jackkeyzer Welcome, i am not too good of a writer but i wish you the best of luck, i know you will only get better, please dont let others comments get you down, i showed my parents and some liked, some didnt, my own books, at the end of the day, you need to love yourself and be proud of your stories, not expet that from others, because some people will be nice, some wont and i dont want you to give up