jade100600

New idea! EH will NOT be being updated for a while.  I have decided to make a main story to go along with it, but it will be the future.  EH will be a SIDE STORY that is like Kiara's story.  The other girls included in this new main story, One Connection, will ALSO have their own side stories.  1D girlfriend spots have been taken, but not all the spots for 5SOS girlfriends are.  Note that you may not be mentioned often until late in the book, maybe even a sequel to it.  Also, spots for Luke's girlfriend and Ashton's girlfriend have been taken.  I still need a role for Michael's girlfriend and Calum's girlfriend.  Thank you!<3
          	~Kieran(:

jade100600

New idea! EH will NOT be being updated for a while.  I have decided to make a main story to go along with it, but it will be the future.  EH will be a SIDE STORY that is like Kiara's story.  The other girls included in this new main story, One Connection, will ALSO have their own side stories.  1D girlfriend spots have been taken, but not all the spots for 5SOS girlfriends are.  Note that you may not be mentioned often until late in the book, maybe even a sequel to it.  Also, spots for Luke's girlfriend and Ashton's girlfriend have been taken.  I still need a role for Michael's girlfriend and Calum's girlfriend.  Thank you!<3
          ~Kieran(:

jade100600

Okay, so Chapter One of Escaping Him is uploaded, but the title of the book WILL change.  A user here on Wattpad suggested "Save Me, Superman" and my friend said that was the best out of all the suggestions given, so that will probably be the new title.  On another note, if you would like to apply to be a 5SOS girlfriend, here is the link: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1aT5h-2YzZdG-AxDX-UzgTAHelMYR2p903YAmiH_5ml0/viewform.  Lastly, now that we've almost reached 20 followers, we would like to allow you guys to get to know us.  With that being said, feel free to leave questions that you would like us to answer on our message board and we will create something as a response to them.  They can be any questions - random questions or getting to know us.  Thank you if you've read through this! :)  I love you guys(: 
          ~Kieran<3

jade100600

**VERY IMPORTANT**
          An amazing author just critiqued my story and, honestly, I agree with her 100 percent.  My story was not well written, the plot wasn't well developed, and there was too much going on.  She, along with many others, said that the chapters should be longer.  Chapter One was so short, they weren't even sure it could be a chapter!  I'm removing the story from Wattpad and I'm going to COMPLETELY revise it.  I'm changing the plot as well.  Before, I hadn't really developed a plot, which killed the story a bit.  I'm changing basically everything aside from the fact that Louis and Kiara are dating and Ava and Louis are going to try to help Kiara with change.  I'm sorry for any inconveniences, but these authors were all right.  Honestly, I wasn't confident in the story, either.  I would constantly get writers block from lack of knowing what to do with the story.  My subplots really weren't crafted well.  Originally, the plot was going to be Nathan's chase for Kiara and Louis fighting to keep her, with Kiara trying to choose between the two.  After reading many other fanfictions and romance novels, I have found that plot to be cliche and way overused.  I'm changing that so that it's no longer the plot.  I'm not giving away what it will be right now, but just know that I am in the process of changing it all.  I'm sorry to all my followers who have enjoyed the story (the few of you), but this will be for the better.  It will be better for me to write, it will be better for you to read, and it will be a better story overall.  Thank you guys if you actually read this.  I know this is a lot.  It's going to be difficult for me to just redo everything, but it's necessary and will eventually help me become a better author.  Thank you.  I love you guys!

jade100600

Heyo guys!  So Ayah is coming back to One Choice!! AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO IS REALLY EXCITED?!  SHE'S BACK!  She will probably write 19 or 20, most likely 20.  Do you guys even read these?  I don't know I feel like you don't.  If you don't, that's cool I guess.  If you do, let me know and I will do something special for you guys.  Maybe dedicate a chapter to you?  I don't know yet.  Well, I guess, comment who your favorite musician (band or singer) is!  If you can't choose, feel free to leave a list. Or, instead, leave favorite song(s)!

jade100600

Wow, I can't believe it's been three weeks since I sent a message to you guys!  First of all, I've reached 14 followers!  It doesn't seem like much, but it really means a lot and I can't thank you enough.  Second, I have started reviewing books WITH Ayah!  Yes, she's back!  She and I have split up our topics, and if you request us to review your book we will tell you who will be reviewing it.  In order for a review, simply read and comment on at least one chapter of One Choice.  Speaking of OC, I'm sorry that I haven't updated!  Chapter 18 should be going up soon, but I will be out of town this weekend... without Internet connection >.<!  I will try to write it this weekend in my spare time (on paper, of course, since that doesn't require connection), but I am going up to my grandma's house to celebrate a late Christmas, so I don't know if I will have time.  Lastly, if you like my novel, One Choice, please spread the word about it!  I am a newbie on writing books, but it would mean a lot if I could get more reads and comments, maybe even votes (recently I get around three reads a chapter).  Thank you guys so much for taking the time to read this as I know it was incredibly long!  If you took the time to read this entire thing, let me know and I will dedicate a chapter of OC to you! Just write on my message board saying "____ (you insert a name of someone, celebrity or someone you know, maybe even yourself) will rule the world someday!"

SweetBookAddiction

Thank you so much for the dedication! It feels so nice to know that my book actually helps people :D.

SweetBookAddiction

aww youre so cute! But still im sending a big thank you with a thousand kisses your way :*** !!!
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jade100600

You don't have to thank me, I should be the one thanking you!  :D
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jade100600

Chapter 16 of Once Choice is up!  It's slightly longer than the past few chapters to make it up to you guys.  And there's no cliffhanger this time;)!  I hope you have a wonderful day (I'm not because my brother is just ugh and he's such a drama queen and overall an annoying, impatient peasant who only thinks of what he wants and doesn't care about anything I want)!  
          ~Kieran<3