jadecat4902

jadecat4902

Hey guys I just uploed chappy 7 I believe up so go check it out ❤️❤️
              
                                                  -kitty

dizzy001

@jadecat4902 hey kitty it's dizzy001 love the beginning of your story but up should edit more where people speak should be more understandable,I have difficulty understanding it and u should use other words than said such as retorted, yelled, answered, asked, and others. It was a very good beginning though, and when I have the time I will read more. Just keep in mind that it could be better and keep on writing.
Yanıtla