jadyndempsey

Hey I'm looking for suggestions. What do you all think I'm missing I'm my writing? I know its flawed and I know some of what I need to work on but what do you guys think that's what matters?

jadyndempsey

He guys I'm just telling you I have put up a new story not like my dragon world series one this one is more focused on romance and real life. If you guys have suggestions on any of my books then just tell me and I'll see what I can do you guys have a good read today cya. (I will be updating dragon world hopefully today :-) )