jaejay1235

My new account is @jaedawg17 because this one makes me SUICIDALLLLL BYEEEEE

Titania_99

Hello! I was wondering if you could perhaps check out my friend's first wattpad story: Never Ever( Charlotte's Story). It updates weekly, and is well worked for! It's not mine but I really want to support my fellow who's writing it! Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/38890406-never-ever-charlotte%27s-story 
               AMD HOLY SHIZZZZZ SEBASTIAN MICHEALS IS MA BABE

Titania_99

@Tamaraaa14 Thanks dude! Don't forget to tell me if ya like it!
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jaejay1235

Yeah I'll hit your friends book up! AND RIGHHHHTTTTTT!!! SEBAS-CHAN IS LIFE
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jaejay1235

Ok...lol so, I read the first two chapters (Part One) and I got really confused at the end of it cuz...idk I think it said something about the two main characters fighting...but yeah I was like..."THEYRE FIGHTING ALREADY?!" Lol but yeah, it was...good. If this is your first time writing a book (ever) then you did well, but the beginning DOES need alterations. Like maybe throw some dialogue in there (the part where they were walking and talking) or be more specific and descriptive about things. I really like the plot though, it seems really interesting, but I just thought I'd say that. :)

bright_shining_stars

heyy mind checking out my book Her Last Breath 
          it would mean alot if u vote and comment your thoughts 
          ur opinion matters 
          tysm ❤️

jaejay1235

I read the description, and I also referred back to the title. Just out of my psychotic mind and pure curiosity, IS SOMEONE GONNA DIE?!?!
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