jaeturps

Thanks guys :)

Well done please continue to post up your story's 

Wonderful writing :)

Sorry about posting the same message four times I thought it wasn't working but don't worry it is as you can see :)       :D
          

I don't think my first book is too good but not bad and I hope you can give me some tips to help me to write better books

I don't think my first book is too good but not bad and I hope you can give me some tips to help me to write better books

I don't think my first book is too good but not bad and I hope you can give me some tips to help me to write better books

I don't think my first book is too good but not bad and I hope you can give me some tips to help me to write better books