I love you x

I am just learning the ropes in my writing, so constructive criticism is appreciated https://www.wattpad.com/story/157385533

*shakes your hand awkwardly* tis the season queen!

“Babies sleeping in here?
          
          Oh
          
          Can I pet them?
          
          I love babies”
          
          -Ethan Dolan getting his wisdom teeth out oml