Thank you for the follow and I read both parts of your story! I like your idea and I think it can go far. I have a few pointers I can give you as well! For one thing, I think you should download Grammarly. It's a really good app that will help catch spelling errors. It can also suggest synonyms for words you write. This helps stop the use of repeated words. You can get the app on your phone or iPad. Lastly, sometimes I see words that should be capitalized. If you want I could help you with your editing for your chapters and story summary. Besides that your good! With a few tweaks, your story will definitely be noticed!