I wanna read Freshman Year. Just rewrite it and all. I wasn't always good at writing. Seriously when I first started in Fanfiction, these were chapters to me.
"Are you okay?" Sara asked with a look of concern on her face.
He looked at her questioningly and replied, "Yeah, no blood I think."
Holding his hands up, he laughed and spoke, "Never knew you were that weak. I felt nothing!"
She charged toward him, and he dodged her as she tried to hit him.
Done. Only four sentences per chapter. I sucked badly then. I can even send you a copy of what I wrote before.