jaller

Pretty quick here, I want to do a run-through or my story Ignition to fix any weird stuff I see. Any folks who want to proofread my story are very welcome. This’ll be the last major task I do with this before I consider it largely finished. After that? I’ll begin to work on posting my next project.

jaller

Pretty quick here, I want to do a run-through or my story Ignition to fix any weird stuff I see. Any folks who want to proofread my story are very welcome. This’ll be the last major task I do with this before I consider it largely finished. After that? I’ll begin to work on posting my next project.

Akira_diKallene

To Jaller,
          If possible, I would like you to read my new story, which has about 3 medium-sized chapters. Can you please give me some advice, like is the story too hard to understand, or any other concerns it might raise. I'll read your works as well, and give you some critique if you choose. A reply would be appreciated. 
          Thanks
          Akitaka

jaller

Hi there. Yes, I could read your story soon and offer what advice I can! So you mostly would like for me to look for clarity? 
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jaller

That's all! Posted all that's left to post in terms of new content for Ignition. Apologies for all the notifications, but I was excited to get the rest of the story out. I'll do edits for other stuff, but that's it for this story. I hope those that read enjoy. I've gotten some fun feedback from people and I hope to get more as time goes on!

jaller

Posted chapters 26 and 27, as well as a few terms! I'm getting close to the climax of the story and I'm on break, so I'll probably be posting quickly until I'm finished now. Anyway, I'm grateful for any reads.

jaller

Also, I’m sorry if I accidentally unfollowed you. I had some people that followed me, so I followed them. Then they unfollowed me, so I unfollowed them. Long story short, I accidentally unfollowed some folks I didn’t mean to. I tried to rectify that, but I might’ve missed some folks. Sorry ‘bout that :p