Hi, I'm inviting you all to critique my work, as I am challenging myself into writing English Story-Novel this time..
I am not some kind of language student, but my field chosen to be taken when I took up my college program entails on reading comprehension and best way seen to test myself is through writing a full-English stories. I couldn't guarantee clean work though, but I'll be very open for corrections and hearing your insights about the story. I hope, you'll support me. If you won't, I won't wait.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/218937405