I made up my mind and im going to be changing a part of the story. It’s not going to make the story all different, but the time they go to the beach house is going to be during the summer instead of in the middle of school, because I hated how I set it up to make it feel unrealistic like ain’t no principle letting them go for 2 months- it bothered me ☠️ So basically the story is still the same, they get into a fight and bam bam bam their swim team makes them go to the beach house. So there’s gonna tweaks in the beginning which will hopefully make it feel more realistic and smooth and I can feel more proud in the book. I’m also going to edit the ending which will make it less sudden ykyk… um thoughts?