Critiques Closed!

Hello? It's really bothering me. So, are you still active? Well, from 13/09/2017 there is no conversation .  And i'm just wondering if you have free time. It won't take long, I promise. Pinky promise
          Can you critisize the first chapter of my book, how to be an optimist?
          Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/146849341-how-to-be-an-optimist

Hi! I would really appreciate it if you'd find time to read and criticize my story. I haven't written anything in a really long time and this story is important for me. Be harsch, I can take it :). Please and thank you! 

Would you like to join my community? Our community is searching for graphic designer bookmark makers bookcover makers and some critiques.

I've got to write a  short fairytale for English with a meaning behind it, any ideas?

So ig no one posts real books on here anymore.....

Ugh I just looked on my feed and the literal only thing on there is just people roleplaying... I don't have a problem with that but it's kinda like the only way to get reads on something is to make either an rp book or some sort of anime smut and I'm not down for either. :(

Thank you tons for nominating my book <3

Am I the only one who wants someone to get on with assassinating Mike Pince and Donald Trump? 

Thank you for following!
          <3

Y'all better be heading over to @SugarSkullPrincesses to join my book club. I promise, it'll be lit. DM me after you join for a spam on your books!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/100379722