jamjidamn

hello! sorry for bothering, but please kindly check my work. still need lot of advices.
          
          Into A New World
          
          https://my.w.tt/9Yn49Gs2HT 
          
          thankyou!

Mampir yuk ke work aku di
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/178058868

Ada yang bisa bantu aku? 

Hi 
          Mampir yuk 
          https://my.w.tt/Ao1lXkV7tR