Jane

Happy new year to you Jane!! How r u

Hi jane how ru

Hey Jane can you please read chapter 24 and give me feedback. Thanks 

Hii Author! I really have to say I loved your book till now!

Can you check out my new chapters? I also checked out your book it was really good. 

Hi Jane just released new chapters could you check them out? 

@jane_inkheart You're most welcome. 
          Though I only told you how I would like the books I read. Anyway all the best editing and completing the book. It seems interesting, even if I'm not one for a futuristic world since I stick to realistic fiction, I'll read it...

Hey @jane_inkheart's. A review as promised.
          Your writing style is good. The wordings and all that but maybe tone it down on the bigger words and don't make it overly descriptive. Less is more. Making it too descriptive will just make some people skip the parts of the book.
          
          Most people read to escape and if it's not someone who reads on a regular basis, they will have a hard time comprehending everything you write. 
          
          Oh BTW I only read the prologue. I'll read more when I have time and try to give it a review. Again it's my honest opinion. Tell me if u think I was rude or smtg, that wasn't my intention.
          
          -Arin

@jane_inkheart No problem. You did the same. It's only right I do too