janrrah18

@ASH_119 Yup!!! :D

ASH_119

You have a nice story!!! but a little friendly advise practice more how you tell your stories & it'll be GREAT!!! :D
          
          I honestly like your ideas!!! :)

Browl6

@ASH_119 
            Di ba pwedeng Perfect nalang hehehe :P
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ASH_119

Yeah!! Practice makes us better!! :D
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janrrah18

Yeah!! i know right!!?? I also feel like it lacks something..:(
            And thank you i'll take your advice & practice more!! :))
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