@janvi099 hi dear.. The plot of the story is going great. U doing it amazingly.. I just f 1 request from u.. When i read you story, i feel like manik giving most of his time to nandini rather than his baby girl. I know that they just want to get to know each other as its only more that 1 month they are being together. But still i feel like he neglected his baby girl just to be with nandini as his baby is still small. I want manik to give his attention to his baby also. I have 1 plot in my mind. If you are ok with it kindly include this plot if it is relevant :
Their baby girl hurt herself badly when her parents not around (may b went to spend time together) and they realised that they should give more attention to her and so on...
This is just a request from me.. Its depends on you whether you want to include this plot or not..