janvi969

Great going! In love with your work! Cheers! 
          Can’t wait for more!

Read all 4 parts. Good work. You're good at giving twists and visualization through words. A tip - try not to rush on some portions. The buildup between Kiara and the Man is also pretty intriguing and I would love to read more about them as well. The hardcore parts were certainly well penned (some more indepth slower fantasy there would be great too) and the balance kept was appreciable. It kept the balance between lust and the story.
          
          Overall ! Further parts are awaited whenever you get time to. I have previously written 2 poetry books and currently working on my novel(not fantasy). Exploring my other writing via wattapad !
          
          Hope I find a good pen friend and reader in you !
          All the best

Hey ..? Can we meet ? 

How's u? 

Hey 

Really nice