So I read the first three chapters of your book 'Fated Creatures' as promised and I would love to say that the book has a great future :). But you need to work a bit on things here and there. As for the cover, I would like to say that since this is a fantasy based story, the cover should be darker and more magical and I suggest you use three characters at max. Jane and that Golden haired guy at most. That makes the cover look neat. :) I hope I could help.